ext_33095 ([identity profile] pinkelephant42.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] draco1002006-10-19 12:33 am

Desperation

Title: Desperation
Pairing: none
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Challenge: Time


Weeks, months, moving persistently by.
A task, a mission. A Mark on my arm.
I can’t decline. This should be an honor.

Days, weeks. The end draws closer.
Searching, finding. Trial and error.
There has to be a way to make this work.

Hours, days, a last-minute discovery.
Pride, triumph, I had thought this impossible.
Death Eaters in a Marked tower.

Minutes. Hours. It seems to last forever.
An exchange; my confidence wavers.
I raise my wand, but I can’t say the words.

Seconds minutes passing flying,
Running hoping, I need a way out!
I’ve failed. I have to escape.

[identity profile] ravenna-c-tan.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm. Nicely turned.

[identity profile] blonde-cecile.livejournal.com 2006-10-19 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
&hearts Oh, Draco! My heart aches for him! This was great - I've been in the mood for exactly this sort of writing lately, too, a little exhausted from so much prose. I miss poetry!

And man, that piece of art is lovely as an icon. &hearts

[identity profile] charlotteschaos.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautifully done!