Dracolicious (marshmallows challenge)

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

Title: Dracolicious
Pairing: Draco/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 100

Dear Draco,
Your eyes are grey like porridge. Your hair is white like marshmallows in hot chocolate. I think about you all the time.
Love,
Your Secret Admirer

Potter,
Your wit leaves a lot to be desired. It must have been the influence of your barbaric Muggle childhood. However, as it appears that you have excellent taste, perhaps there’s hope for you yet. Meet me at the Astronomy Tower tonight and we’ll see if you can’t be taught.
Draco Malfoy

When Draco strolled into the Great Hall hand in hand with Potter the next morning, Gregory stabbed his breakfast bacon.

Comments

[charlotteschaos.livejournal.com]

Haha so cute!

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

haha! i had a suspicion you might be the only one to like draco/goyle.

[charlotteschaos.livejournal.com]

Well it's also exceedingly clever, which I also like ;)

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

aww *blush* thank you.

[nimroddess.livejournal.com]

Hahaha! Love it! Especially that Draco didn't bother with the charade of "Dear Secret Admirer" and all that :)

grey like porridge - ha! Harry cracks me up sometimes.

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

*shifty* when i wrote it, i had goyle in mind as the one who sent the anonymous love note. but with all that recent kerfuffle in fandom on authorial intention, maybe that doesn't really matter. i'm glad it gave you a laugh. :)

[nimroddess.livejournal.com]

OH! haha, that's even better! I was wondering what the bacon stabbing was about. I guess I saw what I wanted to see. And maybe the Draco/Harry listing threw me off. In any case, it's great :)

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

heh. well, the requited ship is h/d by the end of the drabble... ok, i didn't want to spoil the surprise too early. *g*

[soberloki.livejournal.com]

Hee!

Goyle write so good. Goyle loooove Draco. *Draco reads*

Goyle BURNY with the RAGE. GRAAARRRR. *bacon suffers*

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

goyle sadface and mopey. goyle keel potter. hi crabbe, wanna play?

:)

[soberloki.livejournal.com]

Crabbe like Goyle's fun. Potter stinks.

[euphory.livejournal.com]

hahaha!!! poor goyle. lucky harry! it seems that if someone is going to write some variety of draco/goyle/crabbe, it's always goyle/draco. poor crabbe. maybe goyle is better looking than crabbe in the movies?

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

is he? i don't know. i can't tell which is supposed to be which in the movies. actually i have to admit to not reading the books closely/often enough to see a difference between crabbe and goyle. i've heard that one is more violent than the other, but i forgot which. my reason for using goyle is shamefully shallow -- i like the alliteration of his name.

[cravache.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha!!! That's awesome! What a brilliant use of the challenge. Haha, grey like porridge and like marshmallows in hot chocolate. Trust Goyle to use food as an analogy of Draco's looks. I can't help but feel sad for Goyle - it's obvious he put a lot of effort into that letter. ;) Haha, and Draco's arrogance - this is priceless. I love it!

[shaychana.livejournal.com]

dear cravache,
your words make me hungry. your icon makes me drool. i think i'll glomp you now.
love,
shay

[angel-wicked.livejournal.com]

Clever boy *gg*
That's so Draco *nods*
Great Story :)