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ravenclawsquill ([personal profile] ravenclawsquill) wrote in [community profile] draco100 2017-10-16 11:40 am (UTC)

I really enjoyed this!

I like how you show Draco's tension and subsequent relief - especially the line "for a moment his mind scurries". Lovely turn of phrase.

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